You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Dear
Mr.
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Smith, I am writing
this
letter to inform you that I am not able to continue
part
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time
evening
course
of IAS (International Accounting Standards) right now.There are several reasons behind
this
discontinution
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discontinuation
but the main reason is my
full
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time
job. As an accounting and finance professional I always have deadlines and a lot of
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hard work
hardwork
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hard work
to do,Nowadays our financial year closing
time
is going on so I can not able to carry both things at a
time
.Because of
that
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I am not able to focus on my
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part
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part-time
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time
evening
course
and
i
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am lacking behind in
this
course
. I really appreciate your
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teaching
teachinng
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teaching
methods and kind behaviour.I
also
admit that
this
course
is very
helpfull
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helpful
for me and will be very
fruitfull
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fruitful
for my career in future. I feel regret that I can not able to continue
this
course
right now. Anyhow,I have
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free
time
in
evening
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the evening
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on
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next
summer so I am planning to take
this
course
in
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next
summer so that I may fully focus on
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and get full benefits. Thanks and Regards
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sincerely
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