You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am an HR manager of a manufacturing company writing a letter concerning some issues faced by our attendees during the full day general meeting held
last
week at the Ball Room.
It is worth mentioning that our representatives, fortunately, liked the hotel's appearance too much. Linking Words
In addition
, they appreciated the warm welcome given by the hotel staff and their services. Linking Words
Also
, they were happy with the meeting arrangements, sound system and other utilities.
The main concern which they highlighted regarding the Linking Words
food
which was served during lunchtime. Use synonyms
Firstly
, there were limited varieties for vegetarian people. Linking Words
Secondly
, the condition of the bread was too bad. The soup was salty and sour. Many people were unhappy due to the overall quality of chicken curry and rice.
In view of the above, I would highly recommend focusing on Linking Words
food
items. Your chefs should be experienced and should not be done Use synonyms
such
mistakes. Linking Words
Moreover
, all the Linking Words
food
items should be tested before serving on the table in order to take necessary action. I may Use synonyms
also
emphasize adding some vegetarian items to your menu considering the interest of people.
I am hoping the Linking Words
food
quality will improve in future.
Yours faithfully,
Anand VaishnavUse synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite