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In today's world, people spend a lot of money on appearance because they want to look younger. Why does this happen? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays
people
 tend to invest huge amounts of
money
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 their physical appearance with the sole objective of looking younger. A few underlying causes could be determined as the main reasons responsible for the occurrence of
this
 phenomenon which admittedly, I believe to be dramatically beneficial for the investors
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this
 field.
Firstly
, the most convincing argument is that
this
 would help
people
 gain their long-lost confidence back.
This
 is simply because
people
 are facing
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the
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problems of
this
 nature in their
middle-ages
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, originating from an early indication of
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old age which is adversely affecting their level of self-confidence as a consequence.
That is
 to say,
people
 are financially prepared to spend a lot of
money
 to take a
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 back in time,
proning
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proving
 themselves to
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repercussion
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 of commonly
practiced
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 methods,
such
 as plastic surgery, which will take their toll on their general health in time.
Secondly
, another reason for
this
 radical
behavior
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 could be the pressure of a general trend which is fashionable at the time. Following a trend tend to be supremely important to
vast
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 majority of
people
, aiding them to feel
certain
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 level of self-satisfaction which in turn would bring them
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 of volatile happiness.
As a result
 of
this
people
 from various age groups, ranging from teenagers to
elderly
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, would be drastically solicitous to buy beauty products in order to look a few years younger.
Finally
, the trend of spending
money
 in order to look younger is certainly beneficial to both individuals seeking and providing these services.
That is
 to say, seekers of beauty services would be thoroughly satisfied with their physical modifications,
consequently
 earning their sense of self-esteem back, while dramatically helping the beauty sector of
medical
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 industry to boom
furthermore
 in comparison to their current state. In conclusion, it can be plainly advantageous for
people
 to spend
money
 on
betterment
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 of their physical appearance. Owing to arguments elaborated in
this
 essay, it would be mentally and financially beneficial for
people
 in need of medical attention and plastic surgeons respectively
,
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 if these modifications were kept down to an absolute
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bare-minimum
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