Some believe that people are naturally born leaders while others feel that leadership skills can develop. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Leadership
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quality
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is
the
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important factor in society to be a successful
person
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. There is
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a group
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which
believe
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that
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ability is the talent that
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in a
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by birth,
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hand
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there is another segment of
people
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who are confident that
leadership
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quality
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can
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by hard
work
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, skills and passion.
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However
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in my opinion
leadership
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quality
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could be by birth and could be developed by hard
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.
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, it is obvious in
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the mind
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of some
people
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that good
leader
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leaders
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around the world
are
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is
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born with
leadership
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quality
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qualities
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, in their opinion, it is a
God gifted
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talent
that is
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being carried by the
person
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. Having said that
leadership
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quality
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could be by birth, though hard
work
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is
important
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an important
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factor
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to factor
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in
success
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the success
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of any
person
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but
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apply
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, there are some
people
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who have extraordinary,
leading
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leadership
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, critical thinking,
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and decision
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decision making
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decision-making
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skill
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skills
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. These
people
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can learn quickly anything and can play important roles in organizations and daily life. But born abilities are not enough if they are not organized and brought up
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hand
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there is a
second
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view of
people
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,
that is
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,
leadership
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quality
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can be developed. It is the fact that hard
work
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, passion,
achievement
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and achievement
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of goals, plays
vital
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a vital
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role in the success of a
person
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. According to
this
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opinion, it is the determination of the
person
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that
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apply
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how he takes his professional or personal life. A good leader is
the
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apply
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one who
learn
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learns
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from his mistakes and his
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subordinates
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sub ordinates
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subordinates
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.
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Moreover
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leadership
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skill
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skills
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can be developed by polishing skills, there are many examples of great leaders who had nothing in their early life but their hard
work
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and their self
believe
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beliefs
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helped them to become
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leaders. In conclusion, I belied that
leadership
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quality
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is the
combinatio
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combination
of both, born
quality
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and
the
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apply
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hard
work
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. Without hard
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work
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,work
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nobody can utilize his abilities. While hard
work
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and skill
set
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sets
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can change the way of thinking and
working
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work
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.
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