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Due to many young people dropping out from schools , the rate of unemployment is increasing and it effects our society in different ways . In your opinion , how can this situation be improved.

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Because of dropping out youngsters of school, there is an increase in unemployment sharply and it affects every society in different ways.As far as my opinion is concerned,
this
 is one of the major problems all over the
world
 and we have to solve
this
 problem.
To begin
 with, studies are now very important all over the
world
. To get a job in several careers you have to study and do hard work in your studies.As we as know, without
education
 you can'
t
 survive in the
world
 they are many peoples who are unemployed because they haven'
t
 done their
education
 at the time of
education
 they were enjoying their life by doing bad things,not going to school, college or university.They bunked many important classes and in the
end
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 they can'
t
 get passing marks and they left their
education
 because they don'
t
 have an
interest
 in that and now they are feeling bad for that and thinking about past and feel bad about what they have done wrong things.In our ,society it causes a bad effect on children and children
to
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think it's good not to be educated.
On the other hand
, we have to solve
this
 problem to protect our kids' careers.The solution to
this
 problem is that we must understand our children before getting him/her to school we should ask them what think they have an
interest
 because
for example
, if they have an
interest
 in computers,we should support them and get their admission to computer science subject because their
interest
 will make that subject easy for them and they will learn by enjoying it. To conclude in my essay, I must advise students to carry on with their studies because without
education
 you are nothing to the
world
 doing good in
education
 will make your future easier and happier and never give up on the hard times that come in early life but in
this
 hard time you should believe on your self
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