The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagrams provide information about the current and the suggested works to be done in a house.
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, it can be noted that the main
entrance
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, the living
room
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, and the
kitchen
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were still located in the same area with some minor changes.
However
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, the internal
doors
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were moved to the other
side
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of the house. In detail, in the existing and
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proposed floor
plan
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, the living
room
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is on the right
side
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while
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the
kitchen
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is on the left
side
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of the main
entrance
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.
However
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, it can be seen that the
kitchen
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will have some furniture and will have two internal
doors
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attached to it in the new floor plan.
Moreover
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, the stairs, internal
doors
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, and walls will be relocated
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the new plan. The stairs will be longer and directly facing the main
entrance
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door
while
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the storage under it will be removed. The internal
doors
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that open to the living
room
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and the
kitchen
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will now be on the left
side
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of the main
entrance
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and serve as the door to the
kitchen
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. The wall that covered the living
room
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will be removed and will now just be an open space leading to the stairs,
kitchen
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and the main
entrance
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words entrance, room, kitchen, doors, side with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ground floor plan
  • existing layout
  • proposed plan
  • building work
  • key features
  • expansion
  • alterations
  • space utilization
  • functionality
  • aesthetic appeal
  • natural light
  • inhabitants
  • quality of life
  • enhanced flow
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