The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams provide information about the current and the suggested works to be done in a house.
Overall
, it can be noted that the main entrance
, the living room
, and the kitchen
were still located in the same area with some minor changes. However
, the internal doors
were moved to the other side
of the house.
In detail, in the existing and in
proposed floor Change preposition
apply
plan
, the living Fix the agreement mistake
plans
room
is on the right side
while
the kitchen
is on the left side
of the main entrance
. However
, it can be seen that the kitchen
will have some furniture and will have two internal doors
attached to it in the new floor plan.
Moreover
, the stairs, internal doors
, and walls will be relocated according to
the new plan. The stairs will be longer and directly facing the main entrance
door while
the storage under it will be removed. The internal doors
that open to the living room
and the kitchen
will now be on the left side
of the main entrance
and serve as the door to the kitchen
. The wall that covered the living room
will be removed and will now just be an open space leading to the stairs, kitchen
and the main entrance
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