The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams provide information about the current and the suggested works to be done in a house.
Overall
, it can be noted that the main Linking Words
entrance
, the living Use synonyms
room
, and the Use synonyms
kitchen
were still located in the same area with some minor changes. Use synonyms
However
, the internal Linking Words
doors
were moved to the other Use synonyms
side
of the house.
In detail, in the existing and Use synonyms
in
proposed floor Change preposition
apply
plan
, the living Fix the agreement mistake
plans
room
is on the right Use synonyms
side
Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
kitchen
is on the left Use synonyms
side
of the main Use synonyms
entrance
. Use synonyms
However
, it can be seen that the Linking Words
kitchen
will have some furniture and will have two internal Use synonyms
doors
attached to it in the new floor plan.
Use synonyms
Moreover
, the stairs, internal Linking Words
doors
, and walls will be relocated Use synonyms
according to
the new plan. The stairs will be longer and directly facing the main Linking Words
entrance
door Use synonyms
while
the storage under it will be removed. The internal Linking Words
doors
that open to the living Use synonyms
room
and the Use synonyms
kitchen
will now be on the left Use synonyms
side
of the main Use synonyms
entrance
and serve as the door to the Use synonyms
kitchen
. The wall that covered the living Use synonyms
room
will be removed and will now just be an open space leading to the stairs, Use synonyms
kitchen
and the main Use synonyms
entrance
.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words entrance, room, kitchen, doors, side with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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