The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams provide information about the current and the suggested works to be done in a house.
Overall
, it can be noted that the main
entrance
, the living
room
, and the
kitchen
were still located in the same area with some minor changes.
However
, the internal
doors
were moved to the other
side
of the house. In detail, in the existing and
in
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proposed floor
plan
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, the living
room
is on the right
side
while
the
kitchen
is on the left
side
of the main
entrance
.
However
, it can be seen that the
kitchen
will have some furniture and will have two internal
doors
attached to it in the new floor plan.
Moreover
, the stairs, internal
doors
, and walls will be relocated
according to
the new plan. The stairs will be longer and directly facing the main
entrance
door
while
the storage under it will be removed. The internal
doors
that open to the living
room
and the
kitchen
will now be on the left
side
of the main
entrance
and serve as the door to the
kitchen
. The wall that covered the living
room
will be removed and will now just be an open space leading to the stairs,
kitchen
and the main
entrance
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words entrance, room, kitchen, doors, side with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ground floor plan
  • existing layout
  • proposed plan
  • building work
  • key features
  • expansion
  • alterations
  • space utilization
  • functionality
  • aesthetic appeal
  • natural light
  • inhabitants
  • quality of life
  • enhanced flow
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