You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: - Say how you feel about his performance - give details of your musical activities - explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities.
Dear
Mr.
Hardy,
I attended your concert Change the punctuation
Mr
last
weekend in Delhi, and I am writing to share my feelings about it.
Since I keep going to various music
events, I can confidently say that it was one of the best concerts I have ever been to. Although
it was full of energy and powerful performance, at the same time your music
had so meaningful lyrics. Also
, I was mesmerised by your stage presence.
I am also
a music
person, I am self learning
Add a hyphen
self-learning
this
art for last
three years. In order to get feedback on my work, I usually put it on online streaming websites like youtube and Correct article usage
the last
instagram
. Change the capitalization
Instagram
Moreover
, recently I have started to write my own songs, for which I am getting really
good Correct article usage
a really
response
from the online community.
It is a Fix the agreement mistake
responses
well known
fact in Add a hyphen
well-known
music
industry that you Add an article
the music
a music
promotes
new budding singers. So, I would request you to kindly listen to my latest work online, and if you like it, Correct subject-verb agreement
promote
then
please give it a shout out
on your social media profile. I have already sent the web link Add a hyphen
shout-out
on
your email.
I hope you will definitely have a look at my Change preposition
to
music
content.
Yours sincerely,
Aman MalikSubmitted by amanmalik640 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite