You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

Dear Sara,
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hope you are
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pink
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health. My family and
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have recently shifted to your
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apartment
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apartment
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downtown. We are still unboxing our household goods and trying to make
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feel like home. I wanted to inform you about the furnished flat you promised
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not up to the mark.
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of all, the beds are very uncomfortable and noisy
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try to turn my side and
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not all the other
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furniture
furnitures
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in the house
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more like an antique and had been repaired multiple times and they break
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try to touch them.
Refrubished
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Refurbished
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furniture
furnitures
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are not good and could be dangerous for my kids who play around the house. I am worried they could hurt themself accidentally
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these unfit
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furniture
furnitures
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you have provided us. kindly look into the matter and try to replace the old furniture and we will appreciate
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your kindness your tenant, Alex Brilliant
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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