You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take
Dear Sara,
i
hope you are Change the capitalization
I
at
pink Change preposition
in
of
health. My family and Change preposition
apply
i
have recently shifted to your Change the capitalization
I
Correct your spelling
apartment
appartment
Correct your spelling
apartment
in
downtown. We are still unboxing our household goods and trying to make Change preposition
apply
it
feel like home.
I wanted to inform you about the furnished flat you promised Correct pronoun usage
them
are
not up to the mark. Correct subject-verb agreement
is
First
of all, the beds are very uncomfortable and noisy everytime
Replace the word
every time
i
try to turn my side and Change the capitalization
I
Correct your spelling
that's
that
thats
not all the other Correct your spelling
that's
Correct your spelling
furniture
furnitures
in the house Change the wording
furniture
types of furniture
pieces of furniture
items of furniture
are
more like an antique and had been repaired multiple times and they break Correct subject-verb agreement
is
everytime
Replace the word
every time
i
try to touch them. Change the capitalization
I
Refrubished
Correct your spelling
Refurbished
Correct your spelling
furniture
furnitures
are not good and could be dangerous for my kids who play around the house. I am worried they could hurt themself accidentally Change the wording
furniture
types of furniture
pieces of furniture
items of furniture
by
these unfit Change preposition
with
Correct your spelling
furniture
furnitures
you have provided us.
kindly look into the matter and try to replace the old furniture and we will appreciate Change the wording
furniture
types of furniture
pieces of furniture
items of furniture
for
your kindness
your tenant,
Alex BrilliantChange preposition
apply
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The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,
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