IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 6.5

You want to arrange a conference for your company, and you need to ask one of your colleagues to give a presentation in this conference. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter include: Details about the conference; Why you want your colleague to give presentation; What arrangement will you do for this conference

#conference #company #colleagues #presentation #colleague #arrangement
Dear Sam. I’m going to plan a company meeting and I would be grateful
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
 if you will prepare
slides
Correct your spelling
for
show examples
fo
Correct your spelling
for
show examples
 my speech. As I know, you have a large experience in it. The conference is
planning
Wrong verb form
planned
show examples
on
Change preposition
for
show examples
 the 17 of October, so now we have two weeks for preparation. It is going to be in the main hall of
central
Add an article
the central
a central
show examples
 office. I plan, that it will be about 50 participants. The official part will be about 60 minutes, so I need about 20
slides
 for
presentation
Correct article usage
the presentation
show examples
. I want to divide my speech
for
Change preposition
into
show examples
 3 parts. The introduction
Correct your spelling
should
shoud
Correct your spelling
should
 lasts 4-5
slides
. After that 12-14
slides
 of
main
Add an article
the main
show examples
 part, which must contain clue aspects of our work and the nearest goals which we are going to achieve in the
next
 year. The
last
 part is
conclusion
Add an article
the conclusion
a conclusion
show examples
, which must contain the budget
of
Change preposition
for
show examples
 planned projects. The main goal of my entertainment is to convince people in a hall, that we have enough experience to solve all our
task
Fix the agreement mistake
tasks
show examples
 and,
as a result
, to get money for our department. I expect, with your help, I will do it. I hope you will find
a
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
time to help me with
a
Correct article usage
the
show examples
preparaton
Correct your spelling
preparation
. Looking forward to your
responce
Correct your spelling
response
. Best wishes, Maksim M
Submitted by mmolodtsov on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: