Some countries today have passed laws against smoking tobacco in public buildings such as offices and restaurants. Other countries have no intention of doing this. Consider the possible arguments on both sides of the debate, and reach your own conclusion.

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Smoking is extremely dangerous for health,
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some countries have not taken
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seriously ,
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people can smoke in public places.
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, most developed countries have mandated the law, that smoking in public is prohibited.There are a plethora of reasons for passing
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law and will be discussed in
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paragraphs with a suitable conclusion. The
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and foremost reason, for passing
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regulation is to take into consideration of public well-being. If someone is smoking in public places like offices premises or restaurants
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it will
impact
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the indirect inhalation of
tobacco
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to the person who is present in the nearby area. add
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, they will inhale
tobacco
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without any filter which will directly
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their lungs.
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, If smoking in public is not banned
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it will influence the new generation , they will take smoking as if it is very cool. As per
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published by WHO , the person who lives nearby with the person who is smoking ,
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, has more chances of lung infection .
On the other hand
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, in some countries
government
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prefers more of the taxes money
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of public health.To support
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Government
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get more tax on
tobacco
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or liquor rather than healthy food. As if banning smoking in public will
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the sale of
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unhealthy product and indirectly
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their tax collection revenue . In my opinion , if the
government
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cannot ban
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completely, they can make more smoking zone in public places , so that it won't
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the health of the public and will not
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GDP. To conclude
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, the
government
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should take certain measures and should mandate laws to ban
tobacco
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usage in any form in public areas, and local folks should
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raise their voices for the same . so that their
next
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generation will become healthy and fit .
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