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Some people think that all university students sould study whatever they like. Others believe that they shoyld only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.

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A group of individuals present the view that pupils who are going to go to university should pursue their favourite major, whereas others believe these
students
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 have to follow a study that will be necessary over the
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 years. I strongly agree with the former opinion. On the one hand, some
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 convincingly argue that
students
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 should be free to choose their major. From an educational standpoint, educational authorities should not force
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 to follow special branches.
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, they should be encouraged to follow their interests. In my personal experience, if
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 find passion
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 one subject and grow up their knowledge in tertiary education, they will more likely to have good career prospects when they finish their education.
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, they will have more employment possibilities in the future.
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, another group of
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 claim that some subjects
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 as technology or science play a vital role in society in the future. They insist that pupils allow studying some subjects which are important for the
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 years.
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, I do not
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 argument is convincing as if
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 do not like their major, they are not able to learn, and they find it difficult to continue it. I believe, all
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 should be developed and transformed because society is created from different parts, and it needs to have a specialist in those fields.
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, being a professional country can open the door to having a better standard of living. To conclude, in my view,
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 should not be limited to entering a major which it is not really match their interests or ability.
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 can become successful effortlessly in their favourite field.
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, an improved country is powerful in every field.
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