The plans below show a student accommodation buildings 2010 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The pictorial diagrams represent the comparison of student living block structures in 2010 and the present day. As it is shown, compared to the previous structure, in today's building has more number of bedrooms and new car parking area has introduced.
Now, turning into the details, the blocks which were previously used to be garden and living
next
to the bedroom now has converted into the bedrooms. Today, the total number of bedrooms totaled
up to 5 from 3 in 2010. Change the spelling
totalled
Further
, the present car parking just near the main entrance used to be a garden before. Likewise
, there is an additional room known as en-suite which was extended next
to student rooms in the hallway.
To sum up, in today's documentary, the number of rooms is extended from 3 to 5 and a new en-suite room and car parking area are constructed. Rest all rooms are in the same place as usual.Submitted by tyangki on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite