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Team sports are generally promoted as a great way to keep fit and build character. However, sporting events such as soccer matches are often accompanied by violence between rival supporters and other forms of antisocial behaviour. If sporting events cause antisocial behaviour, can team sports really be good for us?

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Children are encouraged to participate in
sports
 right from the beginning of their life . But there are often cases of violence noted between the teams in the
sports
 . While it is common to watch rivalry and other issues during the events , it is fair common to look at the benefits
sports
 provide for our
body
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.
Firstly
 ,
sports
 are a good form of exercise for students who have a long day of sitting in
schools
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school
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. These kids can use it as a break from their everyday routine and stay fit .
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example
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 some youngsters prefer to just participate in
sports
 as a fun activity in the evenings .
Secondly
 , in some countries , governments provide scholarships to young people who have a big win at various levels .
This
 serves as a big chance for the children who have financial problems in the family .
For example
 , I got a chance to study
in
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at
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 a university because I had
good
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 rank
during
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my
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apply
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soccer in India . To conclude, participation in
sports
 is of really good help to children for their health , even if there are cases of violence and mishappenings ; that can be considered less when talked about their benefits .
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