You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter • say what the participants liked about the hotel • explain why they were unhappy about the food • suggest what the manage should clo to improve the foocl in future
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to inform you about the feedback of the meeting held in your hotel.
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Last
month, I booked your place for the business meeting of our company. Linking Words
However
, soon after it was over, I received numerous good reviews from the attendants about the place. Linking Words
First
and foremost, the air conditioning system and the ambience were pleasant Linking Words
therefore
everyone enjoyed them. Linking Words
Moreover
, the sitting arrangement was up to the mark because the tables were placed quite far away so they didn't create any problems. Linking Words
Finally
, the hygiene and the cleanliness were absolutely perfect and they left the participants astonished.
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Although
people were almost satisfied with the arrangements, they have some issues with the food. Linking Words
Firstly
, the taste was not as good as they expected. Linking Words
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this
, the meat was not cooked well. Linking Words
Furthermore
, there were no candle lamps behind the dishes that did not keep them hot and made the items cool earlier.
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Nonetheless
, they are not the bigger problems but can be overcome by outsourcing the contract of cooking to a Linking Words
third
party or by doing some changes to your recipes.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Arsalan FarooqLinking Words
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