You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter • say what the participants liked about the hotel • explain why they were unhappy about the food • suggest what the manage should clo to improve the foocl in future

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
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letter to inform you about the feedback of the meeting held in your hotel.
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month, I booked your place for the business meeting of our company.
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, soon after it was over, I received numerous good reviews from the attendants about the place.
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and foremost, the air conditioning system and the ambience were pleasant
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everyone enjoyed them.
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, the sitting arrangement was up to the mark because the tables were placed quite far away so they didn't create any problems.
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, the hygiene and the cleanliness were absolutely perfect and they left the participants astonished.
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people were almost satisfied with the arrangements, they have some issues with the food.
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, the taste was not as good as they expected.
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, the meat was not cooked well.
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, there were no candle lamps behind the dishes that did not keep them hot and made the items cool earlier.
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, they are not the bigger problems but can be overcome by outsourcing the contract of cooking to a
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party or by doing some changes to your recipes. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Arsalan Farooq
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