You agreed to take a particular job over the summer, but due to unforeseen circumstances, you can no longer take the position. Write a letter including: - Explaining your situation - An apology - Express that you would be interested in the position next summer

Dear Sir/ Madam, I
had
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applied for the job of a library assistant in the school.
Last
week I was called for an interview and was selected for the position, which I
had
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gladly accepted.
However
, I am writing
this
letter with regret to inform you that due to unforeseen circumstances, I can no longer take the position. My family lives in Boston and I got an unexpected call from home
last
night about my grandfather's deteriorating health. I was very close to my grandfather growing up and still am to
this
date. His one wish is to spend some time with his grandchildren
this
summer.
Hence
, I will need to travel to my hometown as soon as the break starts. I was very much looking forward to working with you. But due to
the
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circumstances
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I will not be able to do so. I want to apologize for the inconvenience caused to you, but I
also
hope you will understand my situation. I want to express my gratitude for your confidence in me. I
also
want to express my interest in
this
position for the
next
summer. Request you to kindly consider me. Thanking you in advance. Yours faithfully, Zenia Coutinho
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