the charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world

the charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world
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The six pie charts give information about the
water
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used for industrial, agricultural and domestic purposes in six areas of the world. At first ,glance
it is clear that
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the main purpose of consuming
water
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is for agriculture in six areas, except North
America
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and
Europe
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, with most
water
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consumption for
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industry. A significant majority of
water
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consumption of agriculture in South
America
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, Africa, Central
Asia
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and South East
Asia
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accounts for nearly four-fifths, at 71%, 84%, 88% and 81% respectively.
Although
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the
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for North
America
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and
Europe
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is lower, it is still at nearly a third. The bulk of
water
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in North
America
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and
Europe
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, which is used for Industry is approximately half.
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, a more proportion of
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figure
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for the other areas is nearly one in ten. People who consume
water
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for domestic use in Central
Asia
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and South East
Asia
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are accounted for the same percentage at 7%, and
this
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figure
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is very similar for Africa at 9%,
while
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the
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for South
America
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is nearly 10% higher, at 19%. A similar proportion of
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is used by people
domestic
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in North
America
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and
Europe
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, ranging from 13% to 15%
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dramatic differences are not seen when we compare the figures for domestic
water
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used.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, america, europe, asia, figure with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • irrigation
  • domestic
  • industrial
  • regional disparity
  • economic structure
  • sustainable management
  • water-scarce
  • population density
  • urbanization
  • data trends
  • resource allocation
  • percentage distribution
  • extremes
  • variations
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