Recently published figures show that the wildlife population around the world has decreased by around fifty per cent over the last fifty years. What can we do to help protect the wildlife round the world?

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The wildlife population decreased sharply just over the half of the century. Society and scientists have no doubts, that all disasters, connected with environment, are caused by human activity.
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, the worst and most selfish human activity – deforestation, which causes reducing air cleaning, plenty of animals lost their habitat,
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lead to loss of tribe and famine.
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terrible reason of animal extinction – hunting. Hunters on animals are selling meat, fur, horns and other parts of an animals, especially elks, badgers, marmots, roes and other. Fortunately, in many countries it is forbidden in law level.
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consideration of that problem – waste. Huge amount of waste it is not direct cause, it is chain of small consequences, which can lead to global, severe complications, as a Global warming, air pollution, sea pollution, health diseases. Humanity is able to help protect the wildlife, though only provided that every person in the world will be interested and motivated for it.
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of all, we must follow the rule of “three R waste”: reduce, reuse and recycle.
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, we should be more included in volunteering. Nowadays, volunteering centers are locatedin almost eachtowns. If person does not have an opportunity or time for it, there is alternative: once a month will not be hard to plant tree near the house. In brief, I would like to reiterate, that future of wildlife all in our hands, and we are still able to predict extinction of many species.
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