Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic problems and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

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overuse of motor vehicles in

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day and age. The implementation of higher prices of petrol has been suggested as one

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of fixing the

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dilemma

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traffic

and pollution. In

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that I very much agree that the inflation of petrol prices is a good solution, while

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discussing some ways in which we can overcome the issues stated. Increasing the cost of petrol will cause an

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a majority of the population, yet it can encourage people to reassess the

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in which they choose to travel. Travelling by their own

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vehicle

every day for unnecessary tasks may now seem unaffordable,

thus

reducing the

traffic

and rising pollution in cities. One other

way

in which we can reduce

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emissions

and congestion may be to improve the function of public transport around cities. Making sure there is adequate transport with more frequent departures, allows the public to be more encouraged to travel via trains or busses.

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of individual motor

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vehicles

travelling to the same location

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reducing

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a "Park and ride" scheme that has been proven advantageous in many

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business

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business

districts is a very efficient

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of allowing commuters to drive to a location at which they can park their cars, and travel by bus or

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their final destination.

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suggestion focuses more on eliminating

traffic

jams in big cities. In

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I concur that the increase

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fuel prices is a very effective method of cutting down the problem of exponentially growing

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obstacle

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traffic

and pollution. Allowing better and more efficient

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access

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access

to public transport may be one of the best ways to tackle these predicaments.