In recent years great attention has been paid for the subject of pollution In rece

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the subject of pollution In recent years, great attention has been paid to the topic of who should be the most responsible for the child’s

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numerous discussions on

this

issue. Some people state that parents and teachers ought to be blamed for crimes committed by young children.

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, some opponents disagree with the above perspective. In

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essay, the argument will be carefully examined to support my opinion. The

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thing to consider is the fact that children’s surroundings drastically affect their

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recent report in Japan, about 80

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of young children responded TV games or computer games were the most inspiring for them to make crimes. Thanks to advanced technology, young children can play violent games

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