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Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students to judge right and wrong and to behave well. Some say that teachers should only teach students about academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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While some people maintain that
teachers
 should teach
students
 about
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right and wrong in daily life and become well-behaviour people, others reject
this
 notion, believing that
teachers
 just should teach
students
 about academic
subjects
 at school. It is the goal of
this
 essay to elaborate on two sides of
this
 issue before giving the writer's point of view. On the one hand, there is no denying that
students
 who behave well are a desire of both family and teacher so guiding
students
 to distinguish the right and wrong of problems is essential and not only are parents responsible but
also
teachers
 play an important role to teach them those statements.
Furthermore
, when
students
 have basic knowledge they will not have inaccurate pictures
about
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 the world and avoid
the
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wrong.
Moreover
, they
also
 enhance their personal growth, either
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 or physical
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. They will
also
 maximize their potential in solving problems, managing time, and so on because they have a collection of skills.
On the other hand
,
teachers
 should focus on teaching academic
subjects
instead
 of teaching soft skills. There are
also
 some positive parts. It is no exaggeration to say that academic
subjects
 broaden
students
’ horizons because they can learn more about different advanced fields.
Moreover
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 when they just focus on physical things they will not divert their attention from their study. It leads to good results on their exams.
Last
 but not least, it can open up opportunities for their future that will attract the eye of recruiters. In conclusion, from what
have
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 been discussed, studying academic
subjects
 can benefit
students
with
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 opening more job chances, but people should stay alert to studying the wrong and right of one thing. It is necessary to reaffirm
writer’s
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 position that whether
to
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teachers
 should teach only academic
subjects
 or not is a question that can be answered on a case-by-case
basic
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. Families and schools should carefully weigh up the pros and cons of
this
 problem before reaching a conclusion.
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