you are studying and doing a part time job . A full time position recently opened in the company and your manager is asking you to quite your studies and start working full time. write a letter to him and say what is your decision? why did you make the decision? suggest a solution that will suit both you and the company.

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Dear Mr Ahmed, I am writing
this
letter to apologise you to for the full-time job offer that you offered me. I am currently in the
last
year
of my graduation and doing a part-time job in your firm.
Hence
, I am pleased that you bestowed me a great opportunity to start a permanent job.
However
, with due respect, I just wanted to inform you that I will not be able to do so. There are numerous reasons behind it that turned me to take
this
decision.
First
and foremost, my
first
priority is to complete my graduation because it will not help me to polish my career but assists me to pursue my higher education as well.
Secondly
, along with my studies, I will not be catching enough time to continue full-time work.
Finally
, I have gotten a final
year
project in my
last
year
of university that consumes a lot of effort and time.
Therefore
,
this
made my schedule of studying quite tougher and busier.
Nonetheless
, you are requested to allow me to finish my engineering degree since it is going to be finished by the end of
this
. As a consequence, I will be surely available from the
next
year
and will be able to join your company. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Arsalan Farooq
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • despite

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