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You took your family to nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I would like to write
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 your restaurant 'Luxury Thai Cuisine' which is my favourite restaurant for many years. At the ,latest I had reserved a table for five days.
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, I took my family to a celebration party there. eventually, in the real circumstance, I found that nothing was my intention. On that night, There was plenty of trouble happened. I would like to inform you in more detail. When I and my family arrived, no waitress approached or met the customer with a smile. another thing is there were no tables sufficiently large for us and we need to dine separately.
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, I ordered vegetarian food but the staff told did not have enough ingredients for cooking my order.
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, they served me a piece of bread and orange juice. To be honest, I intended to without pay for meals since your staff unable responsibilities lots of my cuisine list. For all of the things that
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 mentioned, I hope you will take some action and develop your system. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, James well
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