In
the
recent years, young and old Correct article usage
apply
people
are having Use synonyms
lots
of health issues and scientists advise Use synonyms
to
lead a healthy Correct pronoun usage
them to
lifestyle
. Though there are many campaigns raising awareness for a healthy Use synonyms
lifestyle
, Use synonyms
people
tend to continue with unhealthy Use synonyms
activities
. Use synonyms
This
essay will examine the various reasons behind it and will put some solutions for the same.
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Firstly
, long ago, Linking Words
people
were working in fields, walking long distances to reach their work and they were doing jobs which require Use synonyms
lots
of energy. But nowadays, with modernisation, Use synonyms
people
work in Use synonyms
Add an article
an office
the office
office
and use their cars to travel. Fix the agreement mistake
offices
Hence
, they do not burn enough calories and Linking Words
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consequently
they tend to become obese. Previously, Add a comma
,consequently
people
were eating Use synonyms
food
which they were producing themselves, they were Use synonyms
also
cultivating their own crops, were breedingLinking Words
Correct your spelling
cattle
cattles
and hens. Now, Correct your spelling
cattle
most
of the Change preposition
for most
food
that we consume, we need to buy them. Use synonyms
As a result
, most Linking Words
food
that we consume Use synonyms
are
processed Change the verb form
is
food
, which Use synonyms
contain
more fats, calories and sugars. Change the verb form
contains
Moreover
, Linking Words
people
prefer to buy ready-made Use synonyms
food
like pizzas, burgers and other packed foods which are eventually worsening Use synonyms
people
's health.
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Additionally
, with the progression of technologies, Linking Words
people
's Use synonyms
lifestyle
has changed immensely, Use synonyms
people
prefer to watch movies on Netflix and Use synonyms
eating
junk foods, Wrong verb form
eat
therefore
, they do not practice sports. Inadvertently, Linking Words
people
are suffering from high blood pressure, Use synonyms
Correct your spelling
diabetes
diabete
and Correct your spelling
diabetes
lots
of cardiac complications. We are seeing Use synonyms
lots
of campaigns to make Use synonyms
people
aware of doing sport but Use synonyms
this
is not helping a lot. Today, Linking Words
practicing
Change the spelling
practising
sport
has become expensive Fix the agreement mistake
sports
such
as Linking Words
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such as
gyms, Remove the redundancy
apply
zumba
sessions, yoga and other Change the capitalization
Zumba
activities
which are unfortunately luxuries that Use synonyms
people
cannot afford. The government should provide free Use synonyms
activities
to Use synonyms
people
in Use synonyms
th
incapacity to afford Correct your spelling
the
such
fees and even more, many women having children have not enough support to practice sports, Linking Words
for example
, the government can provide Linking Words
free
nursery for their kids, allowing these women to practice some Add an article
a free
activities
In conclusion, I believe that there Use synonyms
are
much more to be done by the local authorities to encourage Correct subject-verb agreement
is
people
to have a healthy Use synonyms
lifestyle
. I am convinced that each individual is conscious of the consequences of unhealthy habits, so they should take the Use synonyms
first
step to take control of their health and have the will to change their old habits.Linking Words
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