More and More businesses as well as individuals are choosing to communicate either professionally or socially using technology rather than being face to face.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communicating.
Technology
have
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has
advance
so much today. Many businesses are adapting these technologies to communicate professionally or socially. Some people think that Change the verb form
advanced
technology
as a medium
have disadvantages while other believe that they
should it as a Correct pronoun usage
apply
medium
for communication
. Both advantages and disadvantages will be elucidated in the subsequent paragraphs.
On the one side, Some individuals think that they should use technology
as a medium
for communication
because with this
technology
they can communicate with anyone around with world. To illustrate, US
embassy uses an online conference to give information about Correct article usage
the US
opening
of visa slots. Add an article
the opening
Moreover
, they believe that it helps in saving time which they can use for other purposes. For instance
, if individual needs to travel one hour for a meeting, he can use this
medium
to save one hour which he can utilize it
for other purposes.
Correct pronoun usage
apply
On the other hand
. Many people think that this
should not be used as a medium
for communication
. They think,
it is hard to understand the real emotions of an individual while Remove the comma
apply
communication
over these technologies. It can lead to miscommunication. Replace the word
communicating
For example
, Company misunderstood the real emotions of an individual when they were reviewing yearly
performance of the company on Add an article
the yearly
this
medium
. They thought they were growing; they were falling every year. In addition
to this
, these technologies are not good for private communications as there are various hackers which can access this
information. To elucidate, Companies
insider trade information got hacked by these hackers and Change noun form
Companies'
Company's
were
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was
deliver
to their competitors. Change the form of the verb
delivered
This
leads to huge
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a huge
loss
for a company.
In conclusion, Fix the agreement mistake
losses
Technology
have
its both advantages and disadvantages. Companies should adapt by Change the verb form
has
first
going through pros
and cons.Correct article usage
the pros
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...