The best way to understand other cultures is to work for a multinational organization. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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company but
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, we can approach it in many ways.
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to know their language.
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above our can education in the History course of the others countries.
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help us to open
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horizon opposite ourselves.
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, some of my foreign friends came to Iran.
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Persian
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start to go to other cities to study and learn
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massive culture. I vividly remember one of them started to learn
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instrument “Setar”.
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some famous documentary movies.
In addition
, we can read some history books. As both of them let us
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become familiar and knows any angels of their culture.
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the slum village
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Africa, what do they do, and I know about their traditional food, clothes and music. The other way is to
work
for a multinational organization. Due to
this
job, you have to learn another language.
Hence
, you can learn about different
cultures
. A shining example of the staff, who
work
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conclusion,
although
we can understand other
cultures
to
work
for an international business, we can achieve it
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various ways. So,
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