You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: -Explain the important -Apologize for the situation -Suggest a new arrangement

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Dear Amanda, I hope my letter finds you well and healthy. I was so excited to see in

week but unfortunately, I got some important work at home. So, I had to postpone my visit to England

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another month. Actually, yesterday I got to know about my sister-in-law's Roka ceremony which is going to be held coming week, and I have to be present there by all means. She is just like my younger sister so I am so happy for her.

However

, I am disappointed that I have to postpone our plan to meet. Hopefully, in November month I would be free,

then

I would definitely come and will have fun there. I am really sorry that you already made all the arrangements for pick up from the airport. But I hope you understand my situation. All the best. Looking forward to seeing you soon. Yours Sincerely, Shikha

Submitted by shikha_dhingra on Sun Sep 18 2022

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
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7 paragraphs

151 words

8.50

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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