A glance at the two line graphs provided reveals a change
of
the number of runners between 2000 and 2009 and a difference Change preposition
in
of
Change preposition
in
proportion
of Correct article usage
the proportion
people
who run on time and run for Use synonyms
standard
line or target in the given period. Generally, more and more training Correct article usage
the standard
people
emerged and chose an Use synonyms
Add a hyphen
on-time
on time
type to run.
More specifically, standing somewhere in the vicinity of 35% in 2000,Add a hyphen
on-time
then
the percentage of training Linking Words
people
fluctuated from 35% to 45% over the subsequent 5 years and reached a peak of 46% in 2005. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, it was a gradual drop of 5% to 2009.
Concerning the Linking Words
second
graph, we can see immediately that the proportion of runners training on time climbed exponentially from 92% to 96% during a 4-year period to 2004. Linking Words
Then
it fell back the initial Linking Words
percent
by 4% to 2006, followed by an increase to 97% in 2008 and remained stable to 2009. Change the spelling
per cent
On the other hand
, during the period given experienced a stable value in the percentage of Linking Words
people
who run for target and standard lines.
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Protection
of the Correct article usage
The protection
environment
has been highlighted as a matter of urgent public concern. While Use synonyms
people
maintain that protecting the Use synonyms
environment
is Use synonyms
responsible
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the responsible
for
the government not Change preposition
of
for
Change preposition
of
citizens
. As far as I am concerned, I am supportive of the argument that governments and Use synonyms
citizens
should be jointly responsible for environmental protection.
The Use synonyms
first
major responsibility Linking Words
associated
with politicians because they have a huge impact Add a missing verb
is associated
for
everyone. It is no exaggeration to say that Change preposition
on
people
who are in the public council should launch campaigns in raising Use synonyms
people
’s awareness of the seriousness of Use synonyms
Correct your spelling
preserving
reserving
the Correct your spelling
preserving
environment
. Use synonyms
For instance
, there are some lessons on “how important the Linking Words
environment
is” or some activities - “ green day” - planting more trees. Use synonyms
Additionally
, Linking Words
besides
raising awareness of Linking Words
citizens
laws should be set out not only to regulate corporation behaviours but Use synonyms
also
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make
their operations more environmentally friendly. Fix the infinitive
to make
For example
, if we don't put away trash in the correct places, Linking Words
people
have to be punished Use synonyms
by
money. Change preposition
with
Finally
, politicians have to have more notice Linking Words
about
Change preposition
of
this
problem and be a mirror for everyone.
Following Linking Words
this
, Linking Words
people
who live in a country or city should be responsible too. Use synonyms
Firstly
, they should have a notification about their actions. Linking Words
People
have to save water or light when they do not use them. Use synonyms
Moreover
, they pay more attention to environmentally friendly goods and change their habits - planting more trees, Linking Words
participating
in events about protecting the Correct word choice
and participating
environment
. Use synonyms
Although
they just contribute a little but just imagining that much little collapse Linking Words
then
will have a huge impact Linking Words
for
their habitat.
In conclusion, from what has been discussed, it is necessary to reaffirm the writer’s position that it is not true if it is just the responsibility of the government. It might lead to Change preposition
on
inefficient
impact. Tackling Correct article usage
an inefficient
this
problem requires the commitment of both politicians and Linking Words
citizens
.Use synonyms
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