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You recently went to the cinema and think that you left something that belongs to you there. Write a letter to the cinema manager. In your letter say when you were at the cinema and which film you saw describe what item you have lost and where you think you left it tell the manager what you want him/her to do

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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
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 letter to inform you that, I lost my wallet from your theatre
last
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 Monday. My friend and I came to the movie Avatar which was at 1.00pm. I am sure that wallet was with me when I entered inside for the show. During the
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interval
intervel
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interview
time
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 we went to a
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coffee shop
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coffeeshop
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coffee shop
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 in the same building to buy some snacks and I remember that I kept
it
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them
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 back in my bag's pocket after the payment. After finishing the movie we went to a shop ,
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 I realised I lost my purse. I searched everywhere but I could not find out.
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, it contains lots of essential documents which include a driving license, voter ID and
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 some liquid cash. I believe , I lost it from inside the theatre. Kindly do the arrangements to find out my seat number was F-01. I am attaching a movie ticket along with
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 letter. I would be grateful to you if I get it back. Please message me if you require any additional information. Thanking you, Yours faithfully Rose

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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