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If you could make two changes in the educational system of your country, what aspects would you change? Support your ideas with reasons and examples and discuss how the changes you suggest would improve the system.

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It's easy to argue that the current educational system in many countries is ineffective, outdated, and inefficient. Many educators are frustrated with a system they believe doesn't prepare students for their future needs. One of these changes would be the implementation of information
technology
 into education through a digital learning revolution. There are so many benefits to using
technology
 in education: it makes learning enjoyable, allows for personalized and interactive classrooms, and helps make students more aware of their environment around them.
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, the other change would be the widespread inclusion of simulation-based learning tools
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 schools as a way to teach engineering principles
such
 as fluid mechanics or engine design.
This
 can be achieved by integrating engineering simulation software into the curriculum. Direct experience with the design, building
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 and testing of models and devices are effective tools for improving understanding of what can be learned from a textbook. Educators must make greater use of advanced simulation software to improve student performance in science,
technology
, engineering, and mathematics (STEM). Computer-based training is getting a lot of attention lately because it is effective in learning both basic skills as well as complex tasks. The
technology
 makes training easy to develop, scalable with big data processing systems and very cost-effective.
For example
, simulation-based training reduces the need for expensive components previously required for training (e.g., flight simulators).
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