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Some groups, such as poor people or people from rural area find it is difficult to access the university education. Universities should make it especially easy for the students come from the rural areas get an access to the university. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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These days, studying
university
 degree is not as luxurious as it used to be in the past.
Although
 more and more
students
 are joining
university
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, there are still significant barriers for people who are not rich and lives in
a
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rural area. I strongly believe that
universities
 should encourage those
students
 to start their degree and to fulfil their completion. It is undeniable to say that there is a significant relationship between a high level of degree and a high earning salary.
Besides
,
this
 privilege is only given to people who can afford to pay the expensive tuition fees. Everyone should have a fair opportunity to study
further
 at
university
 by offering
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scholarship
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 or low rates of
student
 loans. From the perspective of the government,
for
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being poor is inheritable, and
this
 can cause a lot of crimes and financial problems which are not beneficial to the country.
Students
 who live a long distance from a city can encounter some significant difficulties too in getting to the city. Having a long journey to school
effect
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 one's performance, and it is unfair for rural
students
. Many
universities
 all over the world are introducing well-priced
student's
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dormitory
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dormitories
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,
moreover
, some offer a portion of substitution of rent
fee
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fees
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 near the campus.
For example
, since the pandemic, a vast majority of
universities
 started
online
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the online
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 study and you can join classes without any restriction
of
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 your location. In conclusion, It is definitely less beneficial for
students
 from poor family backgrounds or rural regions to study at
university
.
However
, it is extremely important to be given a fair opportunity to any
students
. For supporting them, I insist that government and
universities
 should work together to introduce great perks for
students
such
 as
student
 dormitory, online courses,
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 and inexpensive
student
 loans.
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