Countries should start using nuclear power as their main source of energy; fossil fuels (i.e. coal, oil and gas) are not going to last forever and nuclear power is the cheapest alternative. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Nuclear

energy

comes from splitting atoms in a reactor to heat water in a stream, turn a turbine and generate electricity. Some

people

believe that countries should start using nuclear

power

as their main source of

energy

as fuels are not going to

last

eternally and nuclear

power

is the cheapest alternative. In the essay, we will discuss

about

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the pros and cons of

this

statement Actually, in many countries, nuclear

energy

is being used to produce electricity and the advantage of using

this

particular type of

energy

is that it fights climate change as it provides

carbon free

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to the environment.

Additionally

, nuclear

power

provides job opportunities to

people

. Inadvertently, nuclear station requires a large scale for setting up

its

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their

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stations and

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require lots of precautionary measures and expert to operate

such

type of

energy

. As

such

government

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the government

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should sometimes relocate

people

to other places to construct

such

massive

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industry.

Nevertheless

, in Ukraine, in

the

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1980, there was the incident of

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the Chernobyl

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Chernobyl

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Chornobyl

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nuclear station explosion which

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caused

many

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damage

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to the area and

also

have

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killed many

people

due to high radiation. I believe that there are other natural resources which can be used apart from nuclear

such

as solar

energy

, and wind

energy

to produce

power

. Nowadays, many industries are favouring and providing

facility

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to individuals to produce their own

energy

with

photovoltaic

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solar

panel

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to be installed on the roof of their houses. These

people

can

also

sell the excess

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energy

produced to the authorities. Personally, I do not favour the use of nuclear

power

, but over the years, we have seen that nuclear

power

are

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providing sustainability to the environment.

However

, the government should continue exploring other natural ways to produce electricity or

energy

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Countries should start using nuclear power as their main source of energy; fossil fuels (i.e. coal, oil and gas) are not going to last forever and nuclear power is the cheapest alternative. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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The ease of international travel and the spread of various kinds of mass media all over the world have made it more possible than ever for people to know how other people live in other countries. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Space exploration is much too expensive and the money should be spent on more important things. Q: What is your opinion?

some people believe that the best way to improve driving standards would be to make the drivers take regular road safety courses, others say the stricter punishments for bad driving would be more effective. discus both views and give your own opinion.