Countries should start using nuclear power as their main source of energy; fossil fuels (i.e. coal, oil and gas) are not going to last forever and nuclear power is the cheapest alternative. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nuclear
energy
comes from splitting atoms in a reactor to heat water in a stream, turn a turbine and generate electricity. Some
people
believe that countries should start using nuclear
power
as their main source of
energy
as fuels are not going to
last
eternally and nuclear
power
is the cheapest alternative. In the essay, we will discuss
about
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the pros and cons of
this
statement Actually, in many countries, nuclear
energy
is being used to produce electricity and the advantage of using
this
particular type of
energy
is that it fights climate change as it provides
carbon free
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to the environment.
Additionally
, nuclear
power
provides job opportunities to
people
. Inadvertently, nuclear station requires a large scale for setting up
its
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stations and
it
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require lots of precautionary measures and expert to operate
such
type of
energy
. As
such
,
government
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should sometimes relocate
people
to other places to construct
such
massive
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industry.
Nevertheless
, in Ukraine, in
the
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1980, there was the incident of
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the Chernobyl
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Chernobyl
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nuclear station explosion which
have
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caused
many
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damage
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to the area and
also
have
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killed many
people
due to high radiation. I believe that there are other natural resources which can be used apart from nuclear
such
as solar
energy
, and wind
energy
to produce
power
. Nowadays, many industries are favouring and providing
facility
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to individuals to produce their own
energy
with
photovoltaic
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a photovoltaic
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solar
panel
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to be installed on the roof of their houses. These
people
can
also
sell the excess
of
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energy
produced to the authorities. Personally, I do not favour the use of nuclear
power
, but over the years, we have seen that nuclear
power
are
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providing sustainability to the environment.
However
, the government should continue exploring other natural ways to produce electricity or
energy
.
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