In many countries, more and more young people are leaving school and unable to find jobs after graduation. What problems do you think youth unemployment will cause to the individual and society? Give reasons and make some suggestions.

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Nowadays
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, the number of
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youth
who are jobless is increasing. The rise in
youth
unemployment
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is
iss
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is
going to negatively affect them in many
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such
as lead more crimes and
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mental diseases.
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they do not
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enough money to continue their studies and vacancies in companies with high requirements for their degrees. To solve
this
problem government need support urgently needed to ensure the future of the young.
This
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problems
as well as possible solutions for
this
issue. On the one hand, there are several reasons why
youth
unemployment cause
problems
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themselves as well as the community.
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individuals
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joblessness is a cause of serious
problems
.
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they
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to maintain their lives,
they
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and they
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also
can not be a part of the community. It leads they could get some mental diseases which able to hinder their
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activities
.
Secondly
, for the society or whole , with the increasing
youth
joblessness, to maintain their life they could get some job illegally
such
as robbery and stealing.
On the other hand
, some measures should be taken to mitigate the
problems
of
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unemployment
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government should invest more money in education.
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this
way, young people will
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knowledge and skill to get a suitable job.
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, in Vietnam, using
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unemployed
for manual working
wile
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trainning
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training
their skill
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until
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able to carry out the main missions. In conclusion,
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high
youth
uunemployment
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unemployment
is a big
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for all countries and solutions should be urgently deployed to solve
this
problem.
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