In many countries, more and more young people are leaving school and unable to find jobs after graduation. What problems do you think youth unemployment will cause to the individual and society? Give reasons and make some suggestions.
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problem government need support urgently needed to ensure the future of the young. This
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as well as possible solutions for this
issue.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why youth
unemployment cause problems
to
themselves as well as the community. Change preposition
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individuals
joblessness is a cause of serious Change to a genitive case
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are unable
they
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and they
also
can not be a part of the community. It leads they could get some mental diseases which able to hinder their activites
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activities
Secondly
, for the society or whole , with the increasing youth
joblessness, to maintain their life they could get some job illegally such
as robbery and stealing.
On the other hand
, some measures should be taken to mitigate the problems
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government should invest more money in education. Correct determiner usage
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In
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essential
knowledge and skill to get a suitable job. Change preposition
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unemployed
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while
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training
untill
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until
they
able to carry out the main missions.
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