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Percentage of daily intake of soduim, saturated fat and added sugar consumed in meals and snack (average person USA)

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The three pie charts provide information about the average proportion of
sodium
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, saturated fat, and added
sugar
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 in foods and
snacks
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 that are consumed daily. The data was taken from the United States of America. Overall, it can be seen from the pie charts that
breakfast
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 contains the fewest nutrients, while
dinner
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 contains a lot of nutrients, including
sodium
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 and saturated fat. It is apparent that in the
first
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 chart, the average proportion of
sodium
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,
dinner
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 contains the most
sodium
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 at 43%, followed by lunch at 29%
sodium
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 consumed.
Breakfast
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 and
snacks
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 include an equal percentage of
sodium
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 consumed, making up 14%. The
second
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 chart illustrates the proportion of saturated fat in meals. By eating
breakfast
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 at 16% saturated fat, the least consumed is compared to other meals.
Dinner
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 has 37% saturated fat, lunch has 26%, and
snacks
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 have 21%. The
last
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 chart shows the percentage of added
sugar
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.
Snacks
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 contain the highest amount of added
sugar
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, with 42%. A typical
dinner
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 includes added
sugar
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 at 23%, while lunch includes 19% and
breakfast
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 includes 23%.

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