Individuals can do nothing to change society. New developments can be only brought about by governments and large institutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays
world
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is controlled and
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run
runned
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by government and strong institutions
they
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that
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can introduce new changes, that can steer the destiny of many and affect
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life. While individuals can work on the
change
, they can try to
change
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society
but it takes time for that
change
to get into effect. A government or large institutions are basically a group of people working towards the same goal, working behind the same ideology.
This
essay will argue about the changes that an individual or institution can bring
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the
society
and which one of them is more effective in bringing these changes. There has been a saying, If any person is working on a particular goal
then
there is a
chance
that he will fail many times, before even achieving the goal. But if he
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hard enough he can achieve it. The question is if that goal is big enough like changing
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society
. Can he do it? And how many tries will it take to even achieve that goal? The answer is it's not easy, nothing in life is. But that's the beauty of life . There is a
chance
that his goal may come true and there is
also
a
chance
that it may not. So we can't be sure that he can actually achieve the goal of changing
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society
.
On the other hand
, if any organization is working on the same goal of bringing
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change
or introducing
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thing.
Then
there is a certainty, that
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particular
change
will come
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example: If the concept of digital
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, was only a dream of a particular individual
then
there may have been a
chance
that
particular
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a particular
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dream may not even come true. But when
this
dream is supported by various
organization
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there is a
change
. Maybe, at some time in the
future
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we can even hope to achieve it, it will take time but it will come true. So the answer
is
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is changed
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change
doesn't matter how big or small it is, will come true if backed up by a group of people. But
same
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cannot be said about a
change
that is
supported by only a particular individual.
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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