Individuals can do nothing to change society. New developments can be only brought about by governments and large institutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays

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is controlled and

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run

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by government and strong institutions

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can introduce new changes, that can steer the destiny of many and affect

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life. While individuals can work on the

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, they can try to

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society

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but it takes time for that

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to get into effect. A government or large institutions are basically a group of people working towards the same goal, working behind the same ideology.

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essay will argue about the changes that an individual or institution can bring

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the

society

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and which one of them is more effective in bringing these changes. There has been a saying, If any person is working on a particular goal

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there is a

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that he will fail many times, before even achieving the goal. But if he

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hard enough he can achieve it. The question is if that goal is big enough like changing

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society

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. Can he do it? And how many tries will it take to even achieve that goal? The answer is it's not easy, nothing in life is. But that's the beauty of life . There is a

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that his goal may come true and there is

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that it may not. So we can't be sure that he can actually achieve the goal of changing

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society

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, if any organization is working on the same goal of bringing

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or introducing

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thing.

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there is a certainty, that

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particular

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will come

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for

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example: If the concept of digital

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, was only a dream of a particular individual

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there may have been a

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that

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dream may not even come true. But when

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dream is supported by various

organization

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there is a

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. Maybe, at some time in the

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we can even hope to achieve it, it will take time but it will come true. So the answer

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is changed

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change

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doesn't matter how big or small it is, will come true if backed up by a group of people. But

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cannot be said about a

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that is

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supported by only a particular individual.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

363 words

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Individuals can do nothing to change society. New developments can be only brought about by governments and large institutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

In some countries of the world, cars are replacing bicycles. However, in some countries, bicycles are replacing cars. What are the reasons for these two developments? In your opinion, which one is better?

The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweigh is increasing. What is the reason for the growth in overweigh people? How can this problem be solved?

In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new fast trains between cities. others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?