Employers should focus on personal qualities over qualifications and experience when choosing someone for a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

It is obvious that employers search for
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workers
to
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their businesses and the criteria
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choosing possible candidates is between personal qualities and qualifications.
However
, certifications and
experience
have significant importance in hiring new employees, I do believe that personal skills have much importance. On one hand, many graduates and
certifications
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holders have no real
experience
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their studies, we can see that lots of them
work
in other fields which are not related to their qualifications.
As a result
, if the employers consider only one or two standards, it would be
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wrong method.
For
example
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sometimes accountants
work
in sales and lawyers
work
in accounting works,
therefore
real
experience
should matter on selecting someone for a job.
Although
some resumes would give
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,
it
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could be not real or accurate, some people try to cheat about their background and certifications.
On the other hand
, personal qualities are crucial because it reflects the personal skills and what the employees do have, how they would serve the
work
environment and participate in the
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development
develpoment
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development
of their company,
thus
we should test the new candidates to be sure about
thier
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their
abilities for
work
instead
of
accept
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due to their qualifications.
For
example
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some companies impose hiring
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policy
that each new worker should stay in training period for one or two
month
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before getting
job
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a job
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. I see it is a successful way and helps both
employer
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employers
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and employees.
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, if someone does have the required skills and
experience
for some job he wouldn't be worried to be in
training
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period or
to pass
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any test. In conclusion, while many employers focus on backgrounds and experienced individuals, I do support the view that personal qualities are so precious to consider
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