Some people think that government should ban dangerous sports, such as skydiving and rock climbing

It
often
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argued that extreme
sports
are very dangerous. That's why some
people
think that government should ban dangerous
sports
,
such
as skydiving and rock climbing. In the following lines, I will develop my
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about
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the subject. On the one hand, extreme
sports
maintain our
body
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in shape.
In other words
, to participate in
this
kind of sport, we need a serious workout routine. We have to be physically strong as every muscle of our anatomy is solicited during extreme
sports
.
For instance
, many
people
engage
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in extreme
sports
have a great physique, tend to exercise more and have a healthy diet.
Moreover
, practising extreme
sports
means meeting new
people
. To put it differently, travel to
specifics
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places is required to enjoy extreme
sports
. Discovering
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differents
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cultures and making new friends come along.
For example
, the majority of
people
who prefer extreme
sports
have connections
trough
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the world.
On the other hand
, extreme
sports
have a high level of injuries. To put it simply, extreme
sports
are very dangerous and a
slightly
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moment of inattention can result in serious wounds and perhaps
in
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death. As an example, a rock climber can die just because he
slide
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while climbing
the
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mountain.
Furthermore
, extreme
sports
are costly.
In other words
,
people
who appreciate extreme
sports
spend a large amount of money on training and on equipment. As an illustration, the higher cost of
skydiving's
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equipment. To conclude, extreme
sports
have merits and demerits
who
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need to be considered. I strongly believe that
people
should have the right to
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practice
pratice
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practice
it or not.
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