You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

#qualification #time #work #manager #job #company

Dear Sir or Madam I am Hussamon Juiprik. I work as a Traditional Chinese medicine doctor in Great Clinic. I am writing

this

letter to ask you to change my working schedule. I am recently studying a "Cosmetic acupuncture" course to improve my acupuncture skills, and

week on Monday, 22 June will be a workshop and exam for the certificate.

Therefore

, I would like to ask you for a day off following Monday to provide my participation paper, and I will work

Wednesday, which is my day off

instead

This

certificate will be helpful for new options in the clinic,

such

as cosmetic acupuncture. It would make more income for Great Clinic. I am interested in

this

course and need

this

certificate, and your reply would help me to extend the participation paper. Thank you for being so concerned. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully.

Hussamon

Correct your spelling

Hussam

Juiprik

Submitted by clairchengun on Thu Sep 22 2022

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

154 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 checks
Get all the feedback you need to keep improving your charts and letters.
Unlimited Task 2 checks
Practice and perfect your skills with essays.
Personalized suggestions
Know how to boost your score.
Detailed mistakes analysis
Get instant feedback. Spot every mistake.
Topic ideas generator
Get topic-specific ideas to enhance your writing.
Vocabulary helper
Get the right words for any topic.
Progress tracking
Track your writing improvements.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

5
band
In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
Technology has been developed a lot, creating the e-books and newspapers. It is believed that, in the future, people will no longer purchase printed newspaper or books as they will be able to read everything online. Furthermore, they do not have to pay. Personally, it is true that printed newspaper and books will be replaced by the electronic ones due to its various advantages. There are reasons to support the claim.
6
band
Some peoole think that cities are the best place to live. Others prefer to live in countryside. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
Nowadays, there is a growing tendency for communities in urban areas to prefer to move to rural spaces. I personally agree with the view that living in the countryside will have its advantages.
4.5
band
In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Nowadays, citizens in many countries are more willing to live in cities rather than countrysides, therefore, population in the rural areas decreased a lot. Some think this is a good trand, while others think the opposite. In my opinion, I believe this is not good for current sociaty.
5
band
People who live in large cities face a range of problem in their daily life. What are the most significant of these problem? How can these problem be tackled?
In this day and age, because of urbanization, residents who located in built up area are facing with plenty of issue in their daily routine. This essay will suggest that the biggest problem caused by the ratio of criminal in cities is increased on a daily basis and then submit imposed the law more strictly as the most viable solution.
8
band
It is inevitable that as technology advances, traditional cultures will be lost. It seems that we cannot have these two things together. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many believe that technological advances and tradition are incompatible with each other, and culture will eventually perish. This essay disagrees that both aspects cannot co-exist with each other. It will discuss the role of technology in spreading information about a country's traditional habits.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.

Some peoole think that cities are the best place to live. Others prefer to live in countryside. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

People who live in large cities face a range of problem in their daily life. What are the most significant of these problem? How can these problem be tackled?

It is inevitable that as technology advances, traditional cultures will be lost. It seems that we cannot have these two things together. To what extent do you agree or disagree?