You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

#qualification #time #work #manager #job #company

Dear Sir or Madam I am Hussamon Juiprik. I work as a Traditional Chinese medicine doctor in Great Clinic. I am writing

this

letter to ask you to change my working schedule. I am recently studying a "Cosmetic acupuncture" course to improve my acupuncture skills, and

week on Monday, 22 June will be a workshop and exam for the certificate.

Therefore

, I would like to ask you for a day off following Monday to provide my participation paper, and I will work

Wednesday, which is my day off

instead

This

certificate will be helpful for new options in the clinic,

such

as cosmetic acupuncture. It would make more income for Great Clinic. I am interested in

this

course and need

this

certificate, and your reply would help me to extend the participation paper. Thank you for being so concerned. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully.

Hussamon

Correct your spelling

Hussam

Juiprik

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

154 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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