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you have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. you don't fully agree with this opinion. say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers offer to give guided tour of your twon to the writer of the article

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I have recently come across an article which was published in your newspaper and it is about my hometown.I partially agree with your daily because it was written in both negative and positive concept
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 precious job.I agree with most of the points which are mentioned about the transport system.You have mentioned a train,bus,taxi and underground railway system in your popular daily.
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,I disagree with the author when he claims that air quality in my hometown.
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according to pollution level, so there is less contamination in my town compared to others. I
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 do not agree with the opinion of there are not a lot of trees.Maybe he overlooked evergreen trees while he collected information.Sumgait has much more green in comparison with
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 I would be more than happy to give him a guided tour so that he can witness these facts and get some more insight about them. Yours faithfully Malik Maliki
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