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In some countries, most epople prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?

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There is a tendency for some to prefer rental homes to
owning
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 them in other parts of the world.
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 topic. On the one hand, several downsides associated with being tenants are clear. There is no denying that they may have to live with other people in a
house
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 as sharing a kitchen and a bathroom, which is inconvenient and straightforward to have conflicts sometimes. Another drawback is that these people find it difficult to rent a new
house
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 from time to time when the lease is over.
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, there is no choice
for
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them
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apply
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to move
in
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 a bad condition home if their moving day is coming.
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, saving money plays paramount importance in being a priority of people who want to rent
houses
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.
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 can be explained that they need to purchase and spend a great deal of money on furniture if they buy their
house
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, while landlords can offer them
rent
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to rent
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 their full-
furnishment
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furnished
furnishing
houses
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with
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at
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 an affordable price.
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, one
bed-room
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bedroom
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 which has been renovated recently and included every
things
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such
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 as wifi and furniture in a
house
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 is only 400 dollars per month for one person.
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, individuals are
prone
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more prone
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 to opt for
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 selection than owning
houses
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. In conclusion,
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 renting
houses
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 has some shortcomings in a few aspects
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 as sharing space with others and having a hard time
to find
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 new places, it
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 consists of enormous advantages including
afforable
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affordable
 price.
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