In some countries, most epople prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?

There is a tendency for some to prefer rental homes to
owning
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own

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them in other parts of the world.
This
essay will point out both sides of
this
topic. On the one hand, several downsides associated with being tenants are clear. There is no denying that they may have to live with other people in a
house
such
as sharing a kitchen and a bathroom, which is inconvenient and straightforward to have conflicts sometimes. Another drawback is that these people find it difficult to rent a new
house
from time to time when the lease is over.
Therefore
, there is no choice
for
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but

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them
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apply

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to move
in
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into

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a bad condition home if their moving day is coming.
On the other hand
, saving money plays paramount importance in being a priority of people who want to rent
houses
.
This
can be explained that they need to purchase and spend a great deal of money on furniture if they buy their
house
, while landlords can offer them
rent
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to rent

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their full-
furnishment
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furnished
furnishing

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houses
with
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at

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an affordable price.
For example
, one
bed-room
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bedroom

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which has been renovated recently and included every
things
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thing

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such
as wifi and furniture in a
house
is only 400 dollars per month for one person.
As a result
, individuals are
prone
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more prone

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to opt for
this
selection than owning
houses
. In conclusion,
although
renting
houses
has some shortcomings in a few aspects
such
as sharing space with others and having a hard time
to find
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finding

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new places, it
also
consists of enormous advantages including
afforable
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affordable

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price.
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