Terrorist activities are increasing all across the globe. Thousands of people lose their life because of terrorist attacks every year. What do you think are the reasons for the rising terrorism? How does it affect people of the world?
There is a gradual upheaval observed in terrorism across the globe which is
consequently
harming numerous lives. There are various factors responsible for such
activities which lead to grave repercussions on society.
The foremost reason for the soaring terrorist attacks in the world is the distortion caused by media
. News channels are the representatives of current affairs. Correct article usage
the media
However
, they tend to misinterpret incidents and mislead the citizens by
fake information about other communities. Change preposition
with
This
tendency ramifies in Add an article
the feeling
a feeling
feeling
of outrage among the people Fix the agreement mistake
feelings
for
that group and results in offensive actions toward them. Change preposition
of
For instance
, in India, there are countless incidents of dispute among
Change preposition
between
the
Hindus and Correct article usage
apply
the
Muslims and most of them are caused due to miscommunication and exaggeration by reporters. Correct article usage
apply
Thus
, rumors
serve as the major root Change the spelling
rumours
for
rising terrorist acts.
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of
Furthermore
, lack of monetary funds and feeling
of revenge Fix the agreement mistake
feelings
also
invoke violence. Certain civilizations are financially insecure and its
residents face Correct pronoun usage
their
Correct your spelling
plethora
plethorea
of problems due to the destructions caused during wars. Correct article usage
a plethorea
Such
a happening drives people to take retaliate by hurting the innocents of rival country
. Fix the agreement mistake
countries
Additionally
, financial insecurity compel
adults to join terrorist groups. Change the verb form
compels
For example
, the 9/11 massacre in the USA, was an outcome of rage by some individuals of
Iraq. Change preposition
from
Hence
, wars between the armies indirectly affects
the faultless populace of the countries.
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affect
In addition
, terrorist activities have awful effects on population
. It Add an article
the population
ensues
economic instability in the country as the infrastructure is damaged. Correct your spelling
ensures
Also
, it springs conflict
among the nations. An example of Change preposition
from conflict
this
is, India and Pakistan have
lost several souls during the Kargil war which destroyed Pakistan economically as well as there are frequent battles between the two.
To conclude, terrorism puts the peace of the world at stake. To avoid it, residents need to stay away from unofficial statements and endorse other nations.Unnecessary verb
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