You were hurt in a minor accident in a supermarket and you wish to make a complaint. Write a ltter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter: - give details about who you are - give details about the accident - suggest how the supermarket could prevent similar accidents.

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Dear Manager, I am writing

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letter to complain about the accident I met

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Sunday in your supermarket. My name is Maria, residing at 11th Street, Bristol Road. Your outlet is located on my way to the office,

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,I frequently visit your shop to get my breakfast and other groceries. When I was shopping, I got slipped on the wet floor near the butchery area and I got injured my hands and leg. I found that the water was leaking from the air conditioner valve from the top. Suddenly, one of the other customers helped me to get up and your staff has given me proper

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-aid. It is really disappointing that, nobody from your staff noticed about

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leaking and not maintained your equipment properly. I suggest you give proper instructions to your cleaning staff on

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and

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maintain or repair the air conditioner in your shops in order to avoid

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incidents in the future. I hope you will take the necessary action on

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and keep your shop well maintained and tidy. I would like to visit your shop again and

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to see the changes happen. Yours faithfully, Maria

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

195 words

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