Food travels thousands of miles from farms to consumers. some people believe we should buy food from local farmer to protect the environment and support local businesses. do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Food
which we receive at our nearby shops and supermarkets goes through a long process, which includes several steps. It is recommended that residents should buy the products directly to avoid side -effects created during the processes.
This
essay will argue that buying
food
directly from
farmers
would require extra
time
and
effort
. The benefits of getting fresh quality
food
, financial growth of the
farmers
, and reduction of air, and noise pollution far outweigh any other drawbacks. The main disadvantage is that
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direct buying would require a lot of
effort
and
time
. Most
farmers
have their shops far away in the countryside.
This
means that to buy directly from them, people would require prior planning and extra
time
,especially for
this
task.
For example
, a small regular trip to the farm-side requires an average of 4 hours drive.
However
,
this
can be solved by communities coming together and deciding turns for each family, who travel and buy
food
for everyone in the society.
This
will save
time
and extra
effort
with equality.
On the other hand
, excess air pollution created because of the transport by the middlemen to the shops will reduce.
This
would create an effect on our surroundings by decreasing the pollution, and will indirectly provide an ideal environment for the
food
to remain fresh and calorie effective.
For instance
, the
food
displayed at supermarkets in Pakistan spoils 15% more quickly than, that displayed in UAE, mainly because of environmental factors. Even after all the above actions, the most important point is that
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farmers
would get financially stable, as they are currently underpaid, because of the involvement of the middlemen and various steps. In conclusion, direct purchasing would improve our surroundings and the quality of
food
products, as well as increase
farmers
' income, far outweigh the
time
and extra
effort
required by the locals to cover the distance which would be beneficial for their own health in the end.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbon footprint
  • local economy
  • self-sustainability
  • preservatives
  • food waste
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystems
  • monoculture
  • local produce
  • nutritional value
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