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Movies and computer games containing violence are popular. Some people say they have a negative effect on society and should be censored. Others say they are just harmless relaxation. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Movies and computer games, nowadays, are widespread for the miscreants noticed in society. On one hand some public demands it be unpublished while others consider it to be non-toxic. In
this
 ,essay we will discuss relating both views. We are in a decade where all human beings, both adults as well as children, are addicted to and dependent on multimedia for their day-to-day activities and learning. They contain both impulsive as well as misleading content.
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, a person after a long tiring day will relax their body and mind by watching favourite movies which they like most. Most people find it a way to reduce their mental stress. In contrary to that, there are movies which indirectly affect the personality of many,
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, trying to imitate the character of adorable persons in the story.
Thus
 inversely affecting the population due to the influence
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. We can claim that the crimes that are rapidly increasing in the community are mainly due to the overuse of these media,
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 none can be blamed for
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. It is nearly impossible to delete
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programmes that are harmful to the public.
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, in my opinion, the world should be intelligent enough to differentiate between the good and the bad for a better future.
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