You saw an advertisement for a tennis course in England but you have one or two problems and can’t stay the whole course. Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possible

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you in connection with the promotion on the Internet I have seen recently. Your tennis class look perfect, but before enrolling I would like to clarify some points. Basically, the course suites me: it is close to my place, the price is affordable and I like the training approach described in the ad. Unfortunately, there is one issue. The bottom line is that I will have to live the country before the end of the camp due to my work. I am wondering if it was possible to pay only for the part of the lessons, I would be able to attend? Probably there are some other options,
for example
, have a promocode. Could you please advice wheather it is possble to do that? Feel free to contact, here is my phone number: +1(123) 123 2525. If it works for you, I would be happy to start practicing as soons as possible. Yours faithfully, Artem Altukhov.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • course director
  • inquire
  • attend
  • commitments
  • refund
  • partial refund
  • alternative solutions
  • improve skills
  • unfortunately
  • unable
  • regret
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