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Eating sweet foods produces acid in the mouth, which can cause tooth decay. (High acid levels are measured by low pH values) Describe the information below and discuss the implications for dental health.

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The graph shows us types of
PH
 changing trends connected to the consumption of different sweet food. Here we can see the description of 3 types of sweet food: honey,
fruit
 and
cane
sugar
.
First
 of all, we can see that the honey's line of effect on
PH
level
 seems more friendly than others. The
PH
level
 goes down less rapidly.
In addition
, we can notice the Plato of the
PH
level
 between the 5th and 10th minutes. After the Plato, the
PH
level
 raises straight to the up with a good speed and at the 25th minute raises the top point.
Next
,
fruit
sugar
also
 looks friendly in comparison to
cane
sugar
. The
PH
level
 affected by
fruit
sugar
 goes deeper than in honey's case, but not enough deep as
fruit
sugar
.
Furthermore
, after reaching the bottom point the
fruit
's
PH
level
 goes back to the top smoothly, without any plates and stops. In the end,
cane
sugar
 is the most dangerous for our
PH
level
. The healing of
PH
 after
cane
sugar
's effect takes a lot of time - at least 40 minutes.
That is
 a worthy mark in
this
 research.
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