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Some people believe that men and women are equal and so women should be able to do any job they want. Others feel men and women are not equal and therefore there are certain jobs which are not suitable for women. What is your opinion?

#people #men #women #job #jobs
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the
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people
 believe that
men
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women
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same
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. They can do any job
what
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 they want. Few
people
believes
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 that
men
 and
women
 are not
same
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 . There are some specific jobs which
men
 can do only.
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 hand, Most
people
of
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 society agree that
men
 and
women
 are equal rights. They can do work equally . There is no specific job that
men
 can do and
women
 can't do it. They can participate in any field
what
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 they want and I agree.
On the other hand
, few
people
 believe that
men
 and
women
 are not
same
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 rights.There is a certain
jobs
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 that
a
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men
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men
 can do it only.
Women
 have
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not
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 power to do all kinds of work. They have specific fields to do
job
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. In conclusion, all human beings have equal rights. They can go in any field
what
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 they want may it be
engineer
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engineers
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,
doctor
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doctors
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,
nurse
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nurses
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,
farmer
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farmers
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, labour etc. We should
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avoid
aviod
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avoid
 the difference between
men
 and
women
.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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