Two weeks ago you bought a radio from a local branch of a well-known chain of shops. It did not work properly. The shop took it back and said they would repair it. You have waited a week and it is still not ready. Write a letter to the shop. In your letter say what has happened and how you feel ask them to explain why there has been a delay ask them to repair the radio very quickly or to supply you with a new radio You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Mr. / Mrs.
I am writing
this
letter to inform about bought
a brand new Wrong verb form
buying
radio
. Two weeks ago I bought a radio
from your shop. But Unfortunately
It did not work. So, I returned It Add a comma
,Unfortunately
for
your shop for repair. But I have waited a week and it is still not ready.
Change preposition
to
That is
my favorite
Change the spelling
favourite
radio
and I Used it for
Change preposition
to
a
listen to music. That day , I Correct article usage
apply
also
Turn On the radio
but it has not any
Correct quantifier usage
apply
respond
. So, I restart and sow what is happened . Replace the word
response
On the other
hand
It Red bulb has blinked. Because of Add a comma
,hand
this
reason
I Add a comma
,reason
return
it for repair and I am very sad for
Change preposition
about
this
incident.
Therefore
nowadays I have
Add a missing verb
do have
not
Correct your spelling
no
a
instrument Correct article usage
apply
for
Change preposition
to
listen
to music. So, What is the reason for your delay? Change the verb form
listening
Nevertheless
, That they
your manager said me within 2 days they can Correct pronoun usage
apply
return
it. But I still waiting 2 weeks.
I Suppose your company is a responsible and number one company chain shop. So, you should return
back my device as soon as possible. Otherwise
please return
my cash. So, I hope you give me a request as soon as possible. Thank you.Submitted by kmgaya1996 on
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The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,
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