Two weeks ago you bought a radio from a local branch of a well-known chain of shops. It did not work properly. The shop took it back and said they would repair it. You have waited a week and it is still not ready. Write a letter to the shop. In your letter say what has happened and how you feel ask them to explain why there has been a delay ask them to repair the radio very quickly or to supply you with a new radio You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Mr. / Mrs. I am writing
this
letter to inform about
bought
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buying
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a brand new
radio
. Two weeks ago I bought a
radio
from your shop. But
Unfortunately
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,Unfortunately
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It did not work. So, I returned It
for
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to
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your shop for repair. But I have waited a week and it is still not ready.
That is
my
favorite
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favourite
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radio
and I Used it
for
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to
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a
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apply
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listen to music. That day , I
also
Turn On the
radio
but it has not
any
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apply
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respond
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response
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. So, I restart and sow what is happened .
On the other
hand
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,hand
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It Red bulb has blinked. Because of
this
reason
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,reason
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I
return
it for repair and I am very sad
for
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about
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this
incident.
Therefore
nowadays I
have
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do have
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not
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no
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a
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apply
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instrument
for
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to
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listen
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listening
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to music. So, What is the reason for your delay?
Nevertheless
, That
they
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apply
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your manager said me within 2 days they can
return
it. But I still waiting 2 weeks. I Suppose your company is a responsible and number one company chain shop. So, you should
return
back my device as soon as possible.
Otherwise
please
return
my cash. So, I hope you give me a request as soon as possible. Thank you.
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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