In many countries not enough student are choosing science subjects at university. -What are the causes of this? -What are the effects on the society?

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Science
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plays an important role in
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of the society today.
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, there has been decline a decline in people pursuing
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as a
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option.
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issue
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can
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affect
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effect
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affect
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people at large. The viewpoints
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the cause of
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issue
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and
effects
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the effects
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of
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issue
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will be examined in the subsequent paragraphs.
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,
Students
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don't like to choose
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subjects at university because they consider
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as a very hard
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. As it requires you to have
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good basic understanding of physics and chemistry. To illustrate, Astronomy 101 is one of the
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subject
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which
students
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can choose at Harvard University. Before they can
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, they need to have a good basic understanding of Physics and Maths which are
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as
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the toughest
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in the university.
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to
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, they don't want to pursue their
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in
science
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as we need to have various skills and degrees in order to pursue
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career
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.
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, In order to pursue a
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today in technology, we need to have good knowledge of Maths and Physics and
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at least
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at least
a
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degree to enhance
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this
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career
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.
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can lead to
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an increase
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in
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technical jobs as no one will be available in
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career
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. And less innovation in future technologies.
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Government
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Government
and Education System can take various steps to mitigate
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issue
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.
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, they can make
students
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to
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enroll
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in one
science
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subject
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as a compulsory option.
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will help in building
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understanding of
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and technology.
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, they can
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hold seminars which can guide
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how
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to pursue
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a career
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career
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in
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. In Conclusion,
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issue
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can
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affect
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effect
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affect
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people at large.
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, Education Systems can take various steps like compulsory
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subjects and seminars in order to increase enrollment in these subjects.
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