In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

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Nowadays, Authorities should be encouraging large
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to move urban areas for their region outside of the developed cities. There are various kinds of advantages and disadvantages as well I will discuss in the upcoming fourth paragraphs.
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with the advantages, The growing
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cities
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will be rising and so many job opportunities will be available for their nation unemployed person works. To explain, The law-maker will be trying to
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on their environment and community because
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Commercials areas will be populated by
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good
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, In Russia news reveal that headlines the
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industries
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as Chemical brand will huge impact on their society and
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government will move bad
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their developed big
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, It will be beneficial for their nation and
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health. To commence with the disadvantage, The large
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will be declined for outside the city's and companies product sale's rates down and it will
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on their
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economy. To explicated, The
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will be far away for their daily consumers and its problems for their users and
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as the same effect
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any nation's currencies.
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, In Australian big
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industries
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such
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as Nike
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will be located
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outside of the city it's being annoying for
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consumer and useless for their work.
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will move
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cities
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their work and company users. In conclusion,
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many authorities will be
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develop
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cities.
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, it will be disappointing for their customers and
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and
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will be
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lost
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from their unuseful decisions by the laws and rules.
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