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In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

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Nowadays, Authorities should be encouraging large
industries
 and huge
businesses
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 to move urban areas for their region outside of the developed cities. There are various kinds of advantages and disadvantages as well I will discuss in the upcoming fourth paragraphs.
To begin
 with the advantages, The growing
industries
sities
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cities
sites
 will be rising and so many job opportunities will be available for their nation unemployed person works. To explain, The law-maker will be trying to
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 harmful
effect
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 on their environment and community because
in
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Commercials areas will be populated by
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good
businesses
 in their
country's
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countries
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.
For instance
, In Russia news reveal that headlines the
large
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industries
such
 as Chemical brand will huge impact on their society and
Russian
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 government will move bad
industries
 so far
way
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away
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in
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 their developed big
city's
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cities
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.
Thus
, It will be beneficial for their nation and
citizens
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 health. To commence with the disadvantage, The large
businesses
 will be declined for outside the city's and companies product sale's rates down and it will
be impact
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 on their
region
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regional
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 economy. To explicated, The
industries
 will be far away for their daily consumers and its problems for their users and
company's
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companies
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 as the same effect
for
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on
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 any nation's currencies.
For example
, In Australian big
industry
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industries
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such
 as Nike
shoes
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brand
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brands
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 will be located
on
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outside of the city it's being annoying for
their
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consumer and useless for their work.
Hence
, The
businesses
 will move
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another
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 site
of
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cities
it
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effect
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for
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their work and company users. In conclusion,
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 many authorities will be
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big field to go way far
their
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in their
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develop
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 cities.
Moreover
, it will be disappointing for their customers and
also
 for
advertiser
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advertisers
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 and
economy
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the economy
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 will be
big
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lost
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 from their unuseful decisions by the laws and rules.
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