In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities. What are the advantages and disadvantages?
Nowadays, Authorities should be encouraging large
industries
and huge businesses
work
to move urban areas for their region outside of the developed cities. There are various kinds of advantages and disadvantages as well I will discuss in the upcoming fourth paragraphs.
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to work
To begin
with the advantages, The growing industries
sities
will be rising and so many job opportunities will be available for their nation unemployed person works. To explain, The law-maker will be trying to Correct your spelling
cities
sites
safe
harmful Replace the word
save
effect
on their environment and community because Fix the agreement mistake
effects
in
Commercials areas will be populated by Change preposition
apply
the
good Correct article usage
apply
businesses
in their country's
. Change noun form
countries
For instance
, In Russia news reveal that headlines the large
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of large
industries
such
as Chemical brand will huge impact on their society and Russian
government will move bad Add an article
the Russian
industries
so far way
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away
in
their developed big Change preposition
from
city's
. Change noun form
cities
Thus
, It will be beneficial for their nation and citizens
health.
To commence with the disadvantage, The large Change noun form
citizens'
citizen's
businesses
will be declined for outside the city's and companies product sale's rates down and it will be impact
on their Change the verb form
impact
region
economy. To explicated, The Replace the word
regional
industries
will be far away for their daily consumers and its problems for their users and company's
as the same effect Change the noun form
companies
company
for
any nation's currencies. Change preposition
on
For example
, In Australian big industry
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industries
such
as Nike shoes
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shoe
brand
will be located Fix the agreement mistake
brands
on
outside of the city it's being annoying for Change preposition
apply
their
consumer and useless for their work. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Hence
, The businesses
will move Change preposition
to another
another
site Correct quantifier usage
other
of
cities Change preposition
apply
it
will Correct pronoun usage
which
be
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apply
effect
Replace the word
effective
for
their work and company users.
In conclusion, Change preposition
apply
Although
many authorities will be forces
big field to go way far Wrong verb form
forced
their
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in their
develop
cities. Replace the word
developed
Moreover
, it will be disappointing for their customers and also
for advertiser
and Fix the agreement mistake
advertisers
economy
will be Correct article usage
the economy
big
Correct article usage
a big
lost
from their unuseful decisions by the laws and rules.Replace the word
loss
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