Global environment issues are the responsibility of rich nations not of poorer nations. Do you agree with this opinion.

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Nowadays,
the
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environmental
pollution
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is dramatically increasing all over the world. Some people think that wealthy
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are mainly responsible for
pollution
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, but others
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statement . In
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essay, I will discuss
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the global warming that
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occurs
occures
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occurs
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developed
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with, the developed
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are more responsible than developing
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for
pollution
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.
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the huge number of industries build in wealthy
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rather than in
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porer
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nations
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,to run those industries, they burn
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amount
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of fossil fuels than developing
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can not
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it.
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,
carbon
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di-oxide
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dioxide
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emission is increasing
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the
earth
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, and increasing the sea level.
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, the average temperature is higher day by day
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the
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, wealthy
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are more
focus
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on
green house
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greenhouse
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system than
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days. Due to
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, global
pollution
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raise into the
earth
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means
,
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the higher amount of
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greenhouse
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green house
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greenhouse
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gases
reduce
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the ozone level of
a
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earth
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. As a consequence, natural disasters
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occur
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occur
frequently. To
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illustrate
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illustrate
, earthquake, as well as, flood is common in many developing and developed
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, developed
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have
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sufficient
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sufficient
funds to overcome
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this
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types of disasters rather than developing
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.
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contrary
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, developing
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have less
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adequate
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adequate
funds, and insufficient experts to get rid of
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this
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types of problems .
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, rich
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have a vital role
for
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global problems, along with,
solution
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solutions
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of
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this
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issues.
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summary
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, the
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first -world
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first-world
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countries
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are mainly accountable for global
environment
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environmental
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pollution
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than
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third
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-world
countries
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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